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Old 14-06-2010, 17:44   #1
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A tear for every happy thought

This is a song I wrote two days ago. Kinda folk rocky.




She remembers those happier times at two.
Rolling in daffodils, dungarees, red shoes.
Scrambling after her brothers to the den,
Selling toys from a table for five and ten.

She remembers those times when she cried at two,
With grazes, lost Teddies, getting lost at the zoo.
Coughing and wheezing but she knows its ok,
Cos Banana medicine will send it away.

She remembers the man in the dark at two,
How she ran to her Daddy, “There’s a fire in my room.”
She remembers she cried and longed for the day,
That banana medicine might take it away.
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Old 14-06-2010, 23:27   #2
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That banana medicine might take it away.
Love it.


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Old 15-06-2010, 02:46   #3
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thanks for sharing this


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I'm glad you shared your dear song. Welcome to CS, Fragilepixie.


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Old 15-06-2010, 05:03   #5
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Old 06-07-2010, 21:39   #6
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Thanks for sharing fragilepixie, it's beautiful & sad
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